Monday, 27 August 2018


It was a miserable Saturday, my sister and dad and I went to pick up my sister’s friend Paige. After we picked her up we went to Captain Morgans.
I saw Ashmara, Quinn and Amelia then Abby came. We all sat down and had fish and chips, they were delicious. After we had fish and chips, Amelia,Quinn and Ashmara went into Ashmara’s dad’s car and Abby and I jumped into Ashmara’s mum’s car.
On the way it started raining, so when we got there we put on our rain jackets.
After we put on our rain jackets we hopped on a horse and the horse I rode was called Sparky, he was a cheeky horse.
Once we were all on our horses we played
A game it was called lions and zebras.
Ashmara was the lion and Abby, Quinn, Amelia and I were the zebras.
Ashmara tagged me first and then Amelia.
Amelia tagged Quinn and I tagged Abby.
After we played three more games of lions and zebras, we jumped over some posts Ashmara and Amelia went on the high jumps.
Ashmara went first and she was good then the rest of us tried it and it was fun.
Then once we were finished we went for a little walk.
After a while we came back and hopped off.
When I took off my boots,heaps of water gushed out.
After a fun day, Ashmara, Abby and myself hopped into Ashmara’s dad’s car.
When her dad was driving back to Captain Morgans we were listening to music.
We were also dancing. When we got back we had cupcakes and everyone but me went home so I had to ring my dad to come and pick me up.
Finally my Dad arrived.

Next time I will use paragraphs and try not to make heaps of mistakes.

Wednesday, 22 August 2018

My Santa Writing

we are learning to write persuasive stories. We have to use clear reasons and examples to persuade the reader.