Wednesday, 8 May 2019

Cinquain Poem

        cinquain poem

          Sadness, homesick

          hiding, crying,creeping

            can I come home?

                  Help!

                       

            

                                            

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7 comments:

  1. Kirsten Barrett13 May 2019 at 09:44

    HI Maggie,
    I really like your cinquain poem.

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  2. Anonymous24 May 2019 at 12:33

    - Naomi Awesome job maggie i really liked your poem

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  3. Anonymous24 May 2019 at 12:42

    hi maggie,I think your cinquain poem
    is really cool but I think maybe next time you
    could say what your cinquain poem is about
    well done,keep up the good work
    Mereana.

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  4. Anonymous31 May 2019 at 14:42

    thanks

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  5. Anonymous7 June 2019 at 12:30

    I think you cinquain is really cool and even if you didn't say what it was about I can tell from the way you descibed it. Next time maybe keep you title in line with your poem and make it bold, but other than that I think it was amazing! Fantastic job Maggs! ;]

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  6. Anonymous12 August 2019 at 09:20

    hi maddie
    thank you for the comment.

    from maggie

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  7. Anonymous12 August 2019 at 09:24

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